I found the third one VERY striking, perhaps i wasn't expecting such a stare - its pretty eerie in comparison to the others, and i really like that quality. Also because she is a little harder to find in this image, where as the shadows were a giveaway in the others. Really great. I'm not sure I like the dark gradients on the other ones though, try lightening them up in Lightroom with a shadows gradient (if they weren't added in post).
i wrote bunch of things in the comment but i wasn't logged in and lost everything. so i agree with Erin, i really like the 3rd image, its not obvious where the subject is, my eyes trip out because of the angle you shot this photograph. very mysterious and trippy.
This is a really different and interesting take on Olaf Breuning's work, I really like it. The third image is vert striking but I also like the bottom two. If you lightened up the top portion so they were more uniformly lit I think they'd be more successful. Great job!
the way you can see the eyes in the second one is great.. i would maybe burn the shadows around the figure to give it more depth
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I found the third one VERY striking, perhaps i wasn't expecting such a stare - its pretty eerie in comparison to the others, and i really like that quality. Also because she is a little harder to find in this image, where as the shadows were a giveaway in the others. Really great. I'm not sure I like the dark gradients on the other ones though, try lightening them up in Lightroom with a shadows gradient (if they weren't added in post).
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i wrote bunch of things in the comment but i wasn't logged in and lost everything. so i agree with Erin, i really like the 3rd image, its not obvious where the subject is, my eyes trip out because of the angle you shot this photograph. very mysterious and trippy.
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This is a really different and interesting take on Olaf Breuning's work, I really like it. The third image is vert striking but I also like the bottom two. If you lightened up the top portion so they were more uniformly lit I think they'd be more successful.
ReplyDeleteGreat job!
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