Sunday, February 24, 2013

Heather Cummings Task #2 Re-Shoot: Amy Stein


 Ok so my earlier post of this apartment building I think was too closely cropped to get my idea across (my idea being to capture the literal separation of people from each other and our culture's obsession with privacy). So this is the bigger picture, maybe it's better. But I also thought the following series of images of fences might illustrate this point better. Let me know what you think. Also, any advice about colour balance or anything of that sort is apprectiated. Thank you!







1 comment:

  1. Hi Heather

    Not sure the one apartment image can carry your concept. The fences could work but I think you need to look for situations that feel more enclosed rather than just images of fences. Perhaps also attempt to shoot them all frontal and match your horizon lines up. Look for situations where the fences really seem to separate things in a significant way (perhaps chaos from order, people from nature...etc).

    -Robyn

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